Monday, December 8, 2014

Rhetorical Analysis Outline

Leila's Rhetorical Outline of Haruki Murakami's "Always on the Side of the Egg" Speech

Purpose: to share his opinions (indirectly) on conflict and overcoming challenges

Audience: readers of his books (and thus sympathetic to him) in Israel and the Middle East

Context: receiving the Jerusalem award despite the fighting taking place in Gaza between the Israelis and Palestinians.

Section 1: Introduction and "Liars"

Purpose: To suggest that Murakami may not be a completely reliable speaker, and to not simply hang on every word he says; to suggest that lies are not all bad and both come from and lead to truths

Appeals: Establishes ethos (through discrediting himself). Pathos (talking about why novelists lie). No logos.

Technique: First sentence strong and controversial, calling himself a liar. Lists other types of liars in society, parallelism. Juxtaposition of lies and truth.

Effectiveness: Somewhat effective. Calling himself a liar right from the start also has the opposite effect of leaving a sense that none of the following speech should be taken seriously. However the uneasiness does set the stage well for the idea of a wronged "system" in power that he presents later.

Section 2: Why come to Gaza?

Purpose: explain his motives not just for coming to Gaza, but general life principles

Appeals: Builds Pathos and Ethos
Technique: 
  • Uses personal anecdote, when talking about doing against what he is told 
  • gives a brief description of the situation in Gaza to show his understanding of it.
  •  Ethos building!! Anaphora when talking about choosing to come to Gaza, puts a lot of emphasis on being an active citizen of the world, building ethos among people from countries who may feel that the world wants nothing to do with them

Effectiveness: Effective in convincing the audience he is on their side, functions very well as an introduction to his next section

Section 3: Not a Political Message, A Personal Message

Purpose: Convince the audience that there is a "system" in place that is intended to function for protection of the people but is currently unable to do so

Effectiveness: Very effective. Uses strong pathos to build a connection with the audience and make them pliable to his ideas.

A. Not a Political Message/ Introduction to Walls and Eggs

Appeals: Pathos, some ethos

Technique: 
  • Repeats twice that he is not there to deliver a direct political message
  • Builds a bridge with the audience by saying how he's delivering a personal message, followed by another of his personal insights into life 
  • metaphor: "carved into the wall of my mind"
B. Walls and Eggs

Appeals: Pathos

Technique: 
  • Definition: " 'Between a high, solid wall and an egg that breaks against it..."
    • Wall=Bombers, tanks, rockets, white phosphorus shells (War, Conflict)
    • Egg= Unarmed civilians crushed and burn and shot (by wall)
  • This draws a parallel between his saying and the situation in Gaza, an attempt to build more pathos with the qudience
  • Definition/Metaphor
    • People=Eggs
    • Eggs= a "unique, irreplaceable soul enclosed in a fragile shell.
    • Diction: you and me, us to bring audience closer to him
    C. The System

    Appeals: Pathos

    Technique: 
    • Juxtaposition- "coldly, efficiently, systematically" followed immediately in the next paragraph with emotionally laden words"dignity of individual soul," "life and death," "love," "make people cry and quake with fear and shake with laughter"
    • Personal anecdote about death of father to get sympathy from the audience before presenting a possible controversial idea
    • Diction: "We" used to imply it's not just an idea of Murakami's but something that affects everyone
    • Flips the argument, from always standing on the side of the "egg," the "weak/defeated" party of things, and says that that "we" is the one that created the system that hurts them now

    General Evaluation:

    Murakami is a master of manipulating emotion though style and technique. His speech uses very little logos, instead relying on his ideas and the mood he creates beforehand to keep the audience agreeing with him. He uses his ethos as a writer to allow himself greater freedom in what he says, and then uses pathos to make those ideas believable. More logos, while helpful in bringing a grounding sense of "reality" to the speech, wouldn't have been as effective in getting the emotional (and thus memorable) charge the speech as here, because ideas are open to be shaped by the listener.


    Wednesday, November 26, 2014

    Turkey Read, Turkey Write, Wish Upon a Bone Tonight

    "One more thing: I was on a program in Illinois recently with Senator Paul Douglass, a so-called liberal, so-called Democrat, so-called white man, at which time he told me that our African brothers were not interested in us in Africa. He said that the Africans are not interested in the American Negro. I knew he was lying, but during the next two or three weeks it's my intention and plan to make a tour of our African homeland. And I hope that when I come back, I'll be able to come back and let you know how our African brothers and sisters feel towards us. And I know before I go there that they love us. We're one; we're the same; the same man who has colonized them all these years, colonized you and me too all these years. And all we have to do now is wake up and work in unity and harmony and the battle will be over. I want to thank the Freedom Now Party and the goal. I want to thank Milton and Richard Henley for inviting me here this afternoon, and also Reverend Cleage. And I want them to know that anything that I can ever do, at any time, to work with anybody in any kind of program that is sincerely designed to eliminate the political, the economic, and the social evils that confront all of our people, in Detroit and elsewhere, all the got to do is give me a telephone call and I'll be on the next jet right on into the city."

    -"The Ballot or the Bullet" by Malcolm X. Delivered 12 April, 1964 in Detroit (USA)

    One thing: Thanksgiving was always the best time of year, with family, friends, and lots of people, which was nice from the usual quiet of the house. The Thanksgiving I remember best was when both Tita Martha's family and Tita Gina's family came over. It was kind of crowded, but the kitchen was nice and warm with happy people and fresh cooked food. And of course, we were hungry people around fresh cooked food. We three kids there had the most fun eating as we ravaged the turkey for the wishbone. We had the same goal; the same competitiveness; the same amusement filling all our parents, the same amusement that filled your parents when you did something childish. All we had to do was eat and eat until someone found that bone and the battle would be over. It was thanks to Tita Martha that someone reached that wishbone. It was thanks to Tommy and Brian that most of the turkey got eaten, and to me as well. And I want them to know that I will never again, maybe, look for a wishbone by eating a turkey because it was hard, kind of frustrating, and not a challenge I won, something I like doing, meaning that if we ever get together again that'll be the first thing we do.

    Thursday, October 30, 2014

    Why Should We? With a Firm Conviction, Expose the Truth

    With each new edition of the Code of Conduct, the school administration attempts to change the rules in a way they hope will be of benefit to everyone. As the state began to take notice of the more high-profile cases of what bullying can lead to, the Code of Conduct was revised to account for what was now acknowledged as a serious problem. Within the school, we have recently had an event devoted to anti-bullying in the hopes that by understanding the consequences of bullying and how the school was there to support the students, students would feel more at ease about their personal safety, as well as treat their fellow students better had they not been before. In this way, rules exist to keep students safe and happy.

    But, what happens when those rules can no longer serve their purpose? A number of high school students, myself included, have some concerns regarding the rules that exist. Some students break the rules, unable to understand what is expected of them, and others because they find the rules illogical. Many mean no disrespect to their teachers or other administrators. They're simply trying to get by in a way that works best for them. Blindly following every rule, even the ones we students find to be illogical, is just an empty promise of deference to authority. And that, unfortunately, undermines one of the principles of the school: Being respectful.

    A quick Google search will bring up the definition of a rule as being "one of a set of explicit or understood regulations or principles governing conduct within a particular activity or sphere." Yet, according to Henry David Thoreau, "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it." This is not to undermine the existence of rules as they are, but rather mean to serve as a warning that actions do not always lead to their intended effect.

    Some rules clearly do not make sense. Among the students at school, many are irritated with the rules in place for using the bathroom or going through the halls. The main offender seems to be the 10/10 rule, which dictates that students may not leave a classroom within the first 10 or last 10 minutes of a class to use the bathroom, get something from their locker, or take part in any other activity that involves their body moving around in the hallways. At first glance, this rule seems to be a reasonable idea. If all students stay in their classrooms, then it's easy to tell who is actually being a truant, isn't it? Not quite. This rule fails in several ways. Within what the rule says, in a roughly 50 minute period, there is a thirty minute time frame within which students are allowed to leave the room. This might not seem like a problem, but it fails to account for classes with a "rowdier" combination of students, who may take up to 3 to 4 minutes to settle down, nor for classes that may finish several minutes before the bell rings, meaning that students are only actually allowed to leave the room when there's a high chance they'll miss part of the day's lesson. Some teachers, realizing this, don't let students leave the room because the lesson is so important. Put into an even larger scale, the last and first 10 minutes of a period combined with a 4 minute passing time mean that there's actually a 24 minute gap between times students are allowed into the halls. Compared to other schools, a 4 minute passing time is quite reasonable, but not in all instances. When the crowd in the halls is taken into account, certain places of the school become physically impossible to reach within the given time. From personal experience, unless I leave the cafeteria before the bell rings and am able to avoid the throng of students in the stairwell and main hallway of the second floor, I cannot make it to my study hall in the far end of the English and Social Studies wing of the school. The school is large, and combined with packing your bag, copying homework down into your planner, or stopping to chat with someone on your way to class, many people still only get to class with a minute or less to spare. It takes longer than a single minute to use the bathroom or go to you locker, which might not even be en route to your class.

    In terms of time, we come to another set of rules that students find disagreeable: The Absentee Policy, otherwise known as the H-policy, or simply as H-ing, because if nothing else, the English language at least allows us to turn letters into verbs. Most students understand the need to be at school and to come on time, but sometimes what qualifies as following the H-policy gets a little confusing. The 2014-2015 code of conduct defines tardiness as "not being in assigned classroom ready to do schoolwork when the bell has rung." Again, this is reasonable on paper but not in practice. Ask any student if they've ever had a moment of fear that the late bell would ring before they made it to class, or if they've ever hoped their teacher wouldn't notice them walking in a few seconds late, and most will give you an affirmative response, perhaps explain their own story. I know I've experience that, and I also know how relieved I'd felt when the teacher took no notice of it and there was no record of it in the student portal later. Things carried on nice and neatly. This rule is hard to enforce when:

    1. The school is large enough so that parts of it aren't reachable in the given passing time depending on your starting point

    and

    2. some teachers are stricter than others, in practice represented by some closing the door at the time the bell rings to indicate who's late, and others just letting the stragglers filter in as they check homework or get everyone else settled.

    (On that note, it becomes increasingly difficult to take the rules seriously when even teachers are lax about them, but that doesn't encompass all aspects of the situation. This will be addressed more later.)

    Since the code of conduct says "Two tardies equals one unexcused absence" and "Two tardies will result in detention," it would be safe to assume that most students are in class on time due to the consequences. Yes, to the former. But don't believe for a second that most students follow the rules because of a fear of consequences. Unless you come to school late, are chronically tardy, or walk in halfway through a period, it is very unlikely that anything will happen to you. I've heard stories of students who have almost suffered the listed consequences, but I have yet to meet anyone that has actually done so, even among those who struggle with punctuality, and this is only the first level of punishment. To continue, every two tardies is supposed to result in a detention, with the magic number being 8 tardies a quarter (equaling 3 unexcused absences). If you're "cutting" a class, any further tardies will result in a Saturday detention, and if you're "cutting" a study hall, further tardies will result in In-School Suspension. In other words, it's actually more serious an infraction to cut a study hall than an actual class, especially considering that Saturday is students' free time and we;re supposed to be learning while in school. A student loses more learning time from cutting a class when they don't have a class than actually cutting a class. (Theoretically, you could lose a quarter of a year's worth of credit for being less than a minute late to class 8 separate times.)

    However, this argument does involve quite a bit of nitpicking. Firstly, it is important to come to class on time in order to maximize effectiveness of the period. When everyone is ready, the class can move through material quicker and even get ahead. Referring to the study halls, it's understandable that cutting a study hall is  serious, because unlike when students have a class they need to be in, study halls provide the opportunity for students to make full use of the schools facilities, such as the library, teachers with free periods, or the the Mac Lab (for CGS students). Someone walking in the hallways could say that they were in a study hall heading somewhere else, and most staff (probably a passing security guard or teacher) would take that at face value.

    While speaking about that student in passing, it's necessary to bring up another issue students tend to have.  Passing is not directly mentioned in the rules section of the code of conduct, but the entire existence of the passing system should be questioned at this point in time. Back in elementary school, we didn't have planners with a section to fill out passes in. Instead, our teachers had cute little blocks of wood or a piece of plastic with the word pass written on its surface. This was actually a very effective method, since you would need to physically have the pass on your person when not in the room, and return to the room in order to replace the missing pass. There isn't a way to get around that. (And actually, should 10/10 continue to be used, this elementary school system would be quite effective. Peer pressure is an effective way of getting students to do things, and if one person can't leave the room until the other returns, it gives students a reason to come back.)

    Currently, students fill out their own passes, which are then signed by teachers and check by the teacher or administrator at their destination. Writing in pen is not mandated, which means students could write one pass in pencil, get a signature, then edit the pass as needed throughout the school year. In short, the current pass system runs completely on honesty, which is a wonderful virtue and shows the trust between students and staff, but is also one of the most easily corruptible systems in the school.

    The list doesn't stop with just editing a single pass. Other methods of getting around being late or cutting class include signing your own pass (because there's no actual way of verifying a signature) or simply forgoing the pass altogether (because in my three years of school, I've never had my pass checked by security or staff in the hallways. We exchange pleasantries instead.)

    The final major grievance students seem to have is with their study halls, or in most cases, their study hall teaches. Teachers, though students may sometimes forget, are people too, and each person is different in their own way. The problem is, the fact that people are different is exactly the problem. The study hall teacher who wants you to sign out and fill out a pass in order to go somewhere else is the same teacher who just lets you leave after taking attendance the next time you meet, no mention of passes whatsoever. Because of that, the teachers who are sticklers for the rules, consistently making sure that everybody follows them, while seeming reasonable and well-intentioned, also come off as just a little bit irritating. Moreover, since freshman year my peers and I have been told that we can't go to the library without a pass from an academic teacher. However, verbatim from the code of conduct it says:

    "Using the study hall as a base, students may exercise several options:

    1. Request a library pass- depending on library availability."

    Do study hall teachers not know they can issue passes to the library? Do students know they can get library passes from study halls? Do the librarians know students have more freedom to come to the library?

    With such a lack of communication, it feels strange to have this rule at all. When doing group projects, students are told that communication is key and that if they feel any member of the group isn't doing their fair share of work, they should tell the teacher. That person will not only not receive credit, they'll also be made to work by themselves from then on, because they've proven that they can't work reliably with others. The students who did their work, and weren't a flaky partner, would get the marks they deserve for their time and effort. Each person is held accountable for their actions as an individual member of a group. So why do some staff, who suggest to students to hold other members in their project group accountable, not do the same thing to themselves? Students and staff need to meet each other halfway in order for an kind of system to work, and when teachers don't uphold their part of the bargain, it makes students wonder:

    Why should we?



    Wednesday, October 1, 2014

    From the Evidence Bank of Student Anonymous, On Why We Think What We Think

    It might not be easily apparent, but a lot of high school students today have a problem with the rules that govern them. It's not necessarily that they don't like their teachers or other administrators and break rules as a form of disobedience. Some students, even after receiving an explanation, simply don't understand what is expected of them. Other students, myself included, find the rules to be illogical, and though we follow them, it's an empty promise of our deference to authority. A quick Google search will bring up the definition of a rule as being "one of a set of explicit or understood regulations or principles governing conduct within a particular activity or sphere." And yet, according to Henry David Thoreau, "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it."

    Some rules clearly do not make sense. Among the students at my school, many are irritated with the rules in place for using the bathroom or going through the halls. The first and main offender seems to be the 10/10 rule, which dictates that students may not leave a classroom within the first 10 or last 10 minutes of a class to use the bathroom, go get something from their locker, or any other activity that involves their body moving around in the hallways. At first glance, this may seem like a reasonable idea. If all students stay in their classrooms, then it's easy to tell who is actually being a truant, right? Not quite. This rule fails in several ways. Within what the rule itself says, in a roughly 50 minute period, there is a 30 minute frame of time within which students are allowed to leave the room. This might not seem like a problem, except for the fact that classes don't normally get settled down for a good 3 to 4 minutes after the bell rings, and sometimes classes finish a few minutes before the bell rings, meaning that students are only actually allowed to leave the room when there's a high chance they'll miss part of the day's lesson. On top of that, some teachers, realizing this, don't let students leave the room until even later, because the lesson "is important." Put into an even larger scale, the last and first 10 minutes of a period combined with a 4 minute passing time mean that there's actually a 24 minute gap between the times students are allowed into the halls. To this you may say, "Why not do what you need to do in the 4 minute passing time? Compared to other schools, that's actually pretty reasonable." To which I say, "The school is so large that unless you walk quickly or find a way around other students, it's physically impossible to make it from the cafeteria to the far end of the English and Social Studies wing on the second floor of the school. The school is large, and combined with packing your bag and chatting with friends after the bell, many people still only get to class with about a minute left to spare. It takes longer than a single minute to use the bathroom or go to your locker, which might not even be en route to your class."

    Speaking of time, we come to another set of rules that students find disagreeable: The Absentee Policy, otherwise known as the H-policy, or simply as H-ing, because if nothing else, the English language at least allows us to turn letters into verbs. The 2014-2015 code of conduct for high schoolers defines tardiness as "not being in assigned classroom ready to do school work when the bell has rung." Which, again, is reasonable on paper but not in practice. Ask any student if they've ever had a moment when they walked into class just seconds after the bell has already rung, or make the final dash to their classroom when they realize just how much time has passed. I know I've done that, and I also know how relieved I've felt when the teacher said nothing about it, and when I would check the student portal later, nothing had been done about it, and things carried on nice and neatly. This rule is hard to enforce when

    1. the school is large enough so that parts of it aren't reachable in the given passing time depending on your starting point

    and

     2. some teachers are stricter than others, in practice represented by some closing the door at the time the bell rings to indicate who's late and others just letting the stragglers filter in as they check homework or get everyone else settled.

    (On that note, it becomes increasingly hard to take the rules seriously when even the teachers are lax about them, but this will be addressed more later.)

    Since the code of conduct says "2 tardies equals 1 unexcused absence" and "2 tardies will result in detention," it would be safe to assume that most students are in class on time due to the consequences. Well, yes, to the first part at least. But don't believe for a second that students follow the tardy rules because of a fear of consequences. Unless you come to school late, are chronically tardy, or walk in halfway through a period, it is very unlikely anything will happen to you. I've never known anyone to actually suffer these consequences, even those who struggle to get places on time, and this is only the first level of punishment. To continue, every 2 tardies is supposed to result in a detention, with the magic number for credit loss being 6 tardies in a quarter, equaling 3 unexcused absences. If you're "cutting" a class, any further tardies are to result in a Sat. detention, and if you're "cutting" a study hall, further tardies will result in ISS, or In-School Suspension. In other words, it's actually more serious an infraction to cut a study hall than an actual class, when you consider that a Saturday is your free time and you're supposed to be learning while you're in school. A student would lose more from cutting a class when they don't have a class than actually cutting a class. (In other, other words, theoretically you could lose a quarter of a year's worth of credit for being less than a minute late to class 6 separate times.)

    Don't get me wrong though. It's important to come to class on time in order to maximize the effectiveness of the period. When everyone is ready, you (as a class) can move through material quicker and even get ahead. It's just that these rules need revisions in order for them to also have the maximum effect.

    Another serious offender also has to do with passing. This isn't a clear-cut rule, per-say, or at least it's not mentioned in the concrete rules section of the code of conduct and is elsewhere, but it has come time to address the entire pass system existence. Back in elementary school, we didn't have planners with a section to fill out passes in. Instead, our teachers had cute little blocks of wood or a piece of plastic with the word pass written on its surface. This was actually a very effective method, since you would need to physically have the pass on your person when not in the room, and return to the room in order to replace the missing pass. There isn't really a way to get around that.

    Currently, students fill out their own passes, which are then signed by teachers and checked by the teacher or administrator at their destination. Choice of writing utensil is not specified. In short, the current pass system runs completely on honesty, which is a wonderful virtue and shows the trust between students and staff, but is also one of the most easily corruptible systems in the school.

    Some ways of getting around passes include signing your own pass (because there's no actually way to verify a signature), simply writing passes in pencil and editing the time as you see fit so you're never "late," or even just forgoing the pass altogether (Because I've been here three years now and never actually had my pass checked by security or staff in the hallways. We exchange pleasantries instead.)

    The study hall teachers who want you to have a pass one week are the same teachers who send you off on your way the next week without any passes involved. And because of that, the teachers who are sticklers for the rules and are consistent, while they seem reasonable and well-intentioned, also come off as just a little bit irritating because this is the only place you have to deal with actually following the rules.

    When doing group projects, students are told that if they feel any member of the group isn't doing their fair share of work, they should tell the teacher and that person will not only not receive credit, they'll also be made to work by themselves from then on because they've proven that they can't work reliably with others. The students who did their work, and weren't the flaky kind of partner who worked on-again off-again, get the marks they deserve for their time an effort. Each person is held accountable for their actions as an individual and as a member of a group. So why do some staff, who suggest to students to hold other members in our project group accountable, not do the same thing to themselves? Students and staff must meet each other halfway in order for any kind of system to work, and when teachers don't uphold their part of the bargain, it makes students wonder: Why should we?









    Bonus Content:

    Verbatim from the 2014-2015 code of conduct:

    "Using the study hall as a base, students may exercise several options:
    1. Request a library pass- depending on library availability."

    Yes, your study hall teacher can't tell you that you're not allowed to go to the library without a pass from one of your subject teachers. The more you know.

    Sunday, September 21, 2014

    From the Evidence Bank of Student Anonymous, On What We Really Think


    Place: Study Hall
    Time: 3rd Period
    Infraction: "Responding in a rude or impertinent manner."

    So close to escaping that study hall, just a few more steps before you're out the door...

    "Where are you going? I haven't signed your pass yet."

    A small obstacle. You hadn't expected to be stopped.  You stand still and turn around. Writing out a pass was a waste of time, and frankly, a waste of paper. It's not like you'd ever been stopped in the halls before. You've done this loads of times.

    "I don't need one," you say. "I'm just going down the hallway."

    Frankly, this was all a chore. You'd never been stopped in the halls before, pass or no pass.

    "No, you need to have a pass."

    Well, if you needed a pass, you would ask for one, wouldn't you? Who was it this rule applied to? Students, correct? You would think that after a year or two you would know what rules to bend and break, and this was one of them.

    "No, I don't. It's not like they actually check passes."

    On one hand, you do really want to leave. On the other hand, you're fed up with this nonsense and want to give someone a piece of your mind. The other students seem to have their attention fixed on you...Dare you go on?

    "Just come get it signed."

    You relent, filling in the little boxes with ink that could have been better used elsewhere. The crime isn't worth the punishment. You've already lost two minutes. No need to lose a Saturday morning as well. Everyone returns to what they were doing before you caused a small commotion. Nothing to see here.

    Another teacher walks in.

    "Can you believe this?" asks Teacher 1. " Have you ever heard this before? I don't need a pass."

    You exit quickly, and if that conversation continued, you'll never know.

    (And for the icing on the cake, you actually do end up in that same study hall again, leaving without a pass...)

    Place: Insert Subject of Choice Here
    Time: Whenever
    Crime: 10/10 Violatoin

    "Miss, may I go to the bathroom?"

    A fellow student has his hand raised, asking the tried and true question sure to ruffle feathers with teachers everywhere.

    "Wait a few minutes, 10/10 rule."

    He fills out his pass, waits for the appointed time to come, then leaves.

    But this bothers you a bit. You've talked with your friends, you've come to a consensus. The 10/10 rule makes no sense.

    You can only leave during the first and last 10 minutes of a period? For what purpose? To keep students out of the halls? If anything, you'd be more suspicious if someone tried to leave in the middle of the period, like 10/10 wants them to. That's when the class actually does any work. No one's still getting their things together, and the homework's been checked. No one's itching to leave, either.

    And another thing too. If 10/10 was looked at mathematically, there is a period of 20 minutes where student's aren't allowed out of the room at all. Twenty four, actually, because let's face it, no one actually has time to go to the bathroom during passing and still make it to class on time. And of course, you're not allowed to leave during the constraints of 10/10 because you're teacher's giving a lesson.

    So why...?

    You sigh, brush it off, and add it to the ever growing list of things that don't make sense.

    'And they wonder why we challenge their authority,' you think. You're still smarting from that study hall, and from all the other rules that just don't add up.

    Place: The hallways, most likely.
    Time: When you should be in class
    Crime: "Class Cut"

    You're not one to skip class. You go where you're supposed to go when you're supposed to be there, and everyone's happy, right? Wrong.

    On the topic of class cuts and tardiness you have a whole separate list in the works...

    Some teachers just don't care. Everyone is "always" there.

    Others don't care for tardies. You've never actually gotten one, and if you walk in when everyone is still getting settled down, even three or four minutes after the bell, you know almost for certain that you weren't missed.

    But your biggest peeve is (unsurprisingly) study halls. There are so many different attitudes from all the teachers in the school that you can't begin to comprehend what is fact and what is fiction.

    "I don't care what you do, just don't get caught with your cell phone out if the principal walks in."

    "You'd better pretend to work if you have nothing else to do."

    "You're late."

    "Go to guidance and see if you can get a class this period. This is just a waste of time, on your part."

    (And between one telling you you'll be counted tardy and most of the rest telling you that it's unimportant, you're ready to pull your hair out, because it seems these rules are made up at the teacher's own discretion. And if the students try to do that? Detention. ISS. OSS, in some cases.)

    What is this?

    'We have our duties, and you have yours,' you think. 'We're young and impressionable. How can we hold up our end of the bargain, if you won't hold up yours?'

    Place: Lunch
    Time: Anywhere between 4th to 7th Period
    Crime: None, Just Daydreaming

    You finally have some down time with your friends. You discuss the usual nonsense for a bit, then start your rant on your day's struggle.

    For a little bit, it's all complaining, but then things take a more unexpected turn, and you wonder what it's like to defy authority. You entertain those fantasies of talking back without consequence, of meaning what you say and not taking it back for anyone.

    And what are you gonna do about it? Give me a detention? You will never crush the rebellion. I am just one of many, and this is not the end. We will not let it end.

    Come on. Come at me. Give it your best shot. Ask us why we just won't listen, and then you listen to us. Don't just hear it. Understand it too.

    It's quite nice, in your head. But your brazen lunchtime fantasies die off as the motions of eating take over, and you calm down to think of other things.

    Place: Bus
    Time: After hours
    Crime: None, Just Thinking

    With each subtle infraction of the rules, you wonder if next time, you'll actually get in trouble. Not that anyone actually follows what's written down.

    You recall, vaguely, some quote you'd read about rules. That if rules made sense, they wouldn't be rules. That they exist only to keep someone in power. You know that some rules really do keep you safe, but when you've heard stories of the others told, "Because I said so," you can't help but wonder if that person was true.

    Monday, September 15, 2014

    Some Thoughts on The Egyptian Revolution

    Since major protests started in Egypt on January 25, 2011, many of the country's problems have not only come to light internationally, but become more pronounced at home as well. As protests went on,  long-standing grievances and social and labor demands suddenly exploded in the face of the government, and the collapse of the police and ever worsening security situation were only adding to the problem. Those who were associated with the regime of the former President Hosni Mubarak fell out of power, leading to the loss of many major economic figures.

    Among Egypt's more pressing problems include their  need to stabilize and expand the economy and government, as well as the long present water deficit. Because of this, I feel that Egypt's biggest challenge is an economic one that is tied deeply to solving the problems of the government. Some Egyptian politicians, analysts, and businessmen have responded to Western news station BBC along the lines of "I really do not know" when asked about current President Sisi's policies. So far, it seems that Egyptians will have to learn  more about the President's motives, personality, and policies into the future. The problem, as I see it, isn't that Egyptians are uninterested in their new President and what actions the government will take: The revolution of 3 years ago made that much clear. However, after forcing President Mubarak out of power and President Morsi in 2013, it's remained hard to put faith in the government's actions.

     Still, input into problems such as repairing infrastructure, working on the Suez Canal zone developing project, and stimulating the economy require government assistance to come to fruition. According to columnist Wael Nawara, by preparing and planning national projects, including work on the Suez Canal zone,  would appeal to investment partners in the  Gulf area and help strengthen Egypt's international relations with other Arab countries. If Egypt continues to rely on foreign aid without fixing its own problems, aid will eventually stop coming into the country and problems will continue.

    In terms of how involved the U.S. should be, I think that we should be lightly to moderately involved in order to reestablish good relations with Egypt, but not to the point where they become dependent on our aid or to where they become suspicious of our motives. Current President Sisi has already said (regarding the U.S. and suspension of aid: "You left the Egyptians. You turned your back on the Egyptians, and they won't forget that." So I have mixed feelings about what the U.S. should do. I think that because Egypt does need incorruptible leadership and money right now, it makes sense for the U.S. to try to offer help, but it's not that other countries and organizations are unable to do that, and combined with Egypt's past refusals to offer military aid in Afghanistan, if we try to collect on the aid offered to Egypt later, it could make relations worse between the two countries.

    Some assumptions that the West seem to be making about Egypt is that President Sisi seems to be secretive, or at least not open enough to more clearly have others understand what he's trying to do, that his goals are too ambitious, and that the military is corrupt, inadequately trained, and arrogant. There is fear the the government might over reach with its powers, and a general concern for what will happen in Egypt concerning the power of the President and the power of Parliament.

    Some things I want to know:
    1. How closely do Egyptians follow the news, if at all? How easy is it to access political news or to share it?

    2. Why, despite the high levels of support among the voters, did only around 30-40% of registered Egyptian voters vote during the last election? Were people unaware of the vote going on, were they unable to vote, was it not safe to vote, etc.?



    Wednesday, September 3, 2014

    Where I'm From

    Where I'm from,
    That has no answer.
    My birthplace?
    My heritage?
    From which school I hail?
    All this and more
    To where I'm from
    I answer

    If where I live
    Is what you seek,
    Then here in Norwalk
    Take a peek

    To me, it's not that special
    Where I live, I just reside
    And "home" is but a word
    I've acquired

    I don't know much about it here.
    There's an Oyster Fest each summer, right?
    And an aquarium
    And those everyday stores,
    And yet no mall within 10 miles.

    There's the Wheels bus system,
    and along the 13 Route is where I live
    and along the 41 Route if I'm going to Stamford

    But if I want to pay a visit
    To friends both old and new
    A two-hour trip is in order
    To Bridgeport
    Woo-hoo

    And I suppose that I'm
    From there too,
    And yet the feeling of belonging I'd had
    Left also when we moved

    If my answer is
    My heritage
    Then I'm Filipino
    Half, to be exact
    And on that note
    I'll tell you all about it

    Birthed in my imagination
    From the bedtime stories of my mother
    I thought of people swimming through the streets in the summertime floods
    Of how hard it must be to carry your toga to church as you swam,
    And of people in boats floating along in the flooding.

    Everything was close together,
    And from vague childhood memories
    I thought of houses right alongside each other,
    Of trains running through your back lot,
    Of roosters in the morning
    Rats as large as cats in the walls

    And more recently,
    I see the trash in the streets,
    Rivers green from who-knows-what kind of pollutants
    A day that ends when the sun disappears
    A day that starts before the sun rises,

    Where the wires are hung haphazardly,
    Where Facebook costs less to use to use than wifi
    Where food is bought day by day
    And eaten meal to meal
    And the cats and dogs get the scraps

    And yet everyone is happy
    My ate works hard to support her family
    My kuya studies to become a nurse,
    Begging his aunts to fund his schooling

    And even where their parents have grown lazy,
    The youth work hard for a better tomorrow,
    And if you do ask where I'm from,
    Perhaps I'll answer the Philippines,
    Because it means more to me than a tropical island
    You've never heard of.